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英语如何写出中考高分作文(下)

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阅读电视广告词:“Ifwedon’tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeatear-drop.”根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示:

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源,再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A.[思路点拨]:

①文体:记叙文。

②时态:一般过去时态,一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法,增加感染力。

③写作目的:告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

JinyunMountainisafamousplaceofinterest.Everydayalotoftouristscomeheretoenjoyitsbeauty.Butafewyearsago,someofthempaidnoattentiontoprotectingtheenvironment.Theythrewtheirrubbish,suchasplasticbags,fruitskinsandwastepaperontheground.Sometimestheybroketrees,pickedflowersandkilledbirds.Someevenmadefiresinthewoodstocookfood.Howdangerousitwas.Luckily,greatchangeshavetakenplacehere.Touristsareusedtoputtingtheirrubbishintodustbins,andtheyaredoingtheirbesttoprotectthebirdsandplantsaswell.Theybringtheirownmealsinsteadofcookingtopreventstartingaforestfireinthemountains.Allthesechangesmakeusveryhappy.

B.[思路点拨]:

①夹叙夹议(说明现状,谈谈感想)。

②时态:一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要,应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Waterisveryimportanttohumans.Wecan’tlivewithoutwater.Thewaterwecandrinkisfalling.Butsomepeopledon’tseemtocareaboutit.Theywastealotofwater.Theypourdirtywaterintoriversandlakes.Waterpollutionisgettingmoreandmoreserious.Sowemustdosomethingtostopthepollution.Wenotonlyprotectthewaterbutalsofindwaystoreuseit.Ifwedon’tdothis,thelastdropofwaterwillbeatear-drop.

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