15年中考英语写作突破：应用文与非应用文

应用文与非应用文

写人(景、物);叙事;说理

描写文;记叙文;议论文;说明文;应用文。

描写文

写人;写景;状物

记叙文是培养叙事(讲故事)能力;描写文是培养观察和描述的能力。

写人

1.模板(经典的提纲)

2.范文

3.句;词

高分模板:    

1.开篇句/段:介绍他/她和我的关系,以及基本相关信息介绍(姓名、年龄、身份、基本关系、或外貌特征)。

2.以人物的某方面的特征为中心展开描写。

(可以描写与叙事相结合;抓住特点,切忌面面俱到;描写要讲究顺序:由上到下;由表及里)

3.总结 一两句话简要概括对其映象或评价,再抒发一句"情感句"升华文章

   中考英语作文范文:

MyBestFriend

Jayismybestfriend.Heis15yearsold.Heisalovelyboywitharoundfaceandtwobigsmalleyes.Healwayshasasmileonhisface.HeisalittletallerthanI.

Everymorning,wegoschooltogether.Hestudiesquitewellandhesatopstudentinourclass.Heismodestinhisbehavior.WhenIhavedifficultyinEnglish,Ialwaysaskhimforhelp.Wearebothinterestedinmusic.Atweekends,wejoinsamehobbygroupandplaythepianotogether.

Welikeeachotherverymuch.

语言描写 间接引语;直接引语。

直接引语例:

Sheoftensaystome,"Workwhileyouwork;playwhileyouplay.Ifyoudonotwork,youwillbelazyandofnousetothesociety."Whatapieceofgoodadvicethisis!Imustvalueitandalwayskeepitinmymind.

由于考试中词数的限制,文章可分为若干段落,也可写成一段。

经典句例

结尾升华句:

例:1.Welikeeachotherverymuch./Ilovemyteacherverymuch.

2.Heistheheroinmymind

3.Sheissuchanaughtyandclevergirl.

4.Whatagoodteachersheis!

5.Withherhelp,Imadegreatprogress.

6.Sheteachesussowellthatweallenjoyherclasses.

7.Westillkeepintouchwitheachother,andIbelieveourfriendshipwilllastforever.

8.Ifeelluckytohavesuchanicefriend.

9.She/hehasleftagoodimpressioninmymind.

10.Wehavemadeupourmindstostudyharder,andwinstillgreatersuccessinourstudies.

经典句型:

Ofallmyfriends/teachers,Ilove/like_____most.

He/shetaughtme/usmath/EnglishwhenIwasinprimaryschool/juniormiddleschool.

Withhis/herhelp/encouragement,Imadegreat/rapidprogressat_____(andcaughtupwithothers).

He/sheisabletomakeherclasslively.

SheisaEnglishTeacher.ShecomesfromCanada.→SheisaEnglishTeacherfromCanada.

Heisalovelyboy.Hehasaroundface.Hehasapairofbigeyes.→Heisalovelyboywithafriendlylook/around/longandnarrowfaceandbigeyes.→He/sheisahandsome/pretty/beautiful/niceboy/girl/teacherwithroundface/dark/short/longhair/bigeyes/highnosebridge(withason/twodaughters/Shanghaidialect)

Heisenergetic.Youcanoftenseehimontheplayground,eitherplayingbasketballorvolleyball.

Bebornin…

Hasbeento…hasgoneto…

Workveryhardwithoutcomplaint

Sheiskindandalwayssmiles,andshegetsonwellwithus.

Imetsb.ontheinternet.Weoftenchatontheinternet.Iusuallyplaygameswithhimontheinternet.

Sheisveryresponsibletoherworkandstrictwithherstudents.

Sb.ishard-working/diligent/industrious.Sb.oftenworks/studieslateintothenight.Sb.getsupearlyandsleepsverylateeveryday.

agirlofbeauty;aboyofperseverance;afriendofdevotion;aboyoffifteen.

Sb.looksbeautiful/younger

常用词汇

Tallandthin;shortandstout;wearlongandshort(black/white/golden/fair/grey/hair)hair;good-looking;ordinary-looking;kind;friendly;kind-hearted;tired;nice;naughty;clever;smart;careful/careless;gentle;graceful;wrinkle;enter(school);befondof(doing);begoodat;bereadyto(help…);bebornin;get/wintheprizein…competition;(myhobby)include…(insparetime);(myfriend)payvisitto(myschool);physicalexercise;nowandthen;inonesmind

物品描写                              景物描写

经典模板:                            经典模板:

第一部分物品的外表特征、形状、功能。 第一部分先按空间顺序进行描写

第二部分对物品的印象和态度。         第二部分抒发自己对景色的感受。

   中考英语作文范文:

MyBedroom

Ihaveabedroom.Itisinthemiddleofmyhouse.

Openingthedoor,youcanseeabigbed.Itisbrown.Thereisatoybearonit.Icallit"Benben".Itslovely.Isleepwithiteverynight.Onthewall,therearetwonights.Theylooklikemushrooms.Theyareverybeautiful.Ontheleftandrightssidesofthebedtherearetwosmalldesks.Aphotoofme,somebooksandEnglishtapesareonthem.

Mybedroomisneitherbignorsmall.Itisverybright.Icleaniteveryday.Soitisalwayscleanandtidy.

Thisismybedroom.Itisasmallworldofme.