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Version122Somepeopleclaimthatusingtobaccohasbroughtseveresocialproblemsandsmokingshouldbebanned.Towhatextentdoyouagreewiththe

abovestatement?

Introduction(56words)

Sincethediscoveryoftobaccorelatedtoanumberofhealthproblems,anincreasingnumberofpeoplehavecalledforprohibitingsmoking.Itisundeniablethatstillaconsiderableamountofsmokersexistinthisworld.Iwouldliketoexaminetheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofsmokingcigarettesasfollowingandthenoffermyownopinion.

Body1(95words)

Therearesomeadvantagestotakingtobacco.(topicsentence)First,tobaccoindustrycontributesagreatproportionofrevenuetothenation.Extremelyhightaxationimposedontobaccoyieldingandcigarettemanufacturinghasreleasedthefinancialburdenforboththegovernmentandtheindividualtaxpayergenerationbygeneration.Second,thesoothingeffectsofsmokinghasbeenconfirmedbyordinarysmokers;particularlythosewhohavehard-brain-workingjobsareinfavorofit;theyclaimthatsmokingcigarettescanmakethemcalmandstimulatebraincellstoworkmoreefficiently.Finally,cigarettesplayanimportantroleinsocialactivities.

Body2(106words)

Ontheotherhand,smokingdemonstratesnumerousnegativeeffects.(topicsentence)Initially,nicotinemaybringtakersanumberofdiseases.Second-handsmokingalsodoesharmtoyourhealth.Moreover,hatredfromnon-smokersalwaysgrowagainstsmokershencesomeconflictsarisefrequently.Wethenlookatthestatisticsshowingthatthousandsoffireaccidentsworldwideoccureachyearduetothelitterofnon-extinguishedcigaretteends,nottomentiontherelateddeathsandlosses.Lastbutnotleast,expenseshavetobetakenintoconsideration.Finecigarettesarenotcheap.Ifyougetaddictedtothem,yourdailyamountofcigaretteconsumptionwillincreaseinevitably,emptyingyourpocketmoney.

Conclusion(88words)

Afterall,sofarnodirectevidencehasbeenprovidedthatsmokingcandefinitelyresultintakersdeathoflungcancer,andthosefireaccidentsaretheresultofcarelessnessorirresponsibilityofthesmokers,nottobaccotobelaidblames.Also,spendingpocketmoneycanneverbeconsideredasafinancialburden.Inaddition,Isuggestmorerestrictedsmokingareasbeplannedsoasnottoviolatenon-smokersrights.Afterweighingtheprosandconsofusingtobacco,I,forone,amagainsttheacttobansmoking.

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(作者：广州仲恺雅思培训中心专职教师赖劲松)