10月11/18日雅思考试Task2(A)范文

写在前面：没想到旅游的题目能出到这么难，想不偏/离题都难。据我了解多数人写偏了或者自己不知自己写了什么。这道题必须锁定下面两个要点：

1、这是由不同文化背景的人去他国旅游而得到的understanding和引起的tension，忽略国际旅游或不同文化均以离题处置，英语高手可凭TASK1得高分换得最后得分5；

2、这是argumentation的D型题，tension和understanding两方面都必须提及，只说一方面而不提另一方均以偏题处置，程度高者可得5分。作文的评分标准首条：answeringthequestionaccurately跟英语表达水平的高低没多大关系，这次是否会大开“杀戒”呢？普通考生，尤其是高中生该有什么对策呢？等这次outcome出来后再来斟酌。(附范文)

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Internationaltourismnowisthebiggestindustryintheworld.Unfortunately,itcreatestensionratherthanunderstandingbetweenthepeoplesfromdifferentcultures.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththeaboveopinion?

----------argumentation-----totally353words-------------------Tourismcancreatejobsandotheropportunitiesforalmostallcommunities.Therefore,Governmentsworldwidehaveworkedoutmanyincentivesaimedatdevelopingoverseasmarket.PersonallyIbelieve,tensionisalwaysaccompaniedwithinfluxesofforeignvisitors,whichhasalreadyovershadowedunderstandingachievedviatravel.(44words)

Letmestartbytalkingaboutthetensionbroughtbyinternationaltourism.LastIndependenceDayFestival,I,followedbyacoupleoffriends,traveledtoasmallcountylocatedinBolivia.Surprisinglywehappenedtoseethousandsofpeoplesinginganddancingonthestreet.Threeguysdressinginlocalcostumeswayedbadlytowardsus,bringingdrinkingbeerforus.Owingtoourarrivalinatotallynewplace,wedeclinedtotakeanyalcoholincaseofbeingentrapped.Unexpectedlyquarrelsoccurredasaconsequenceoflanguagebarrier.What’sworse,oneofthemspittedonus,whosebehaviorturnedourjourneytobeatripofhumiliationandresentment.Asamatteroffact,thelocalresidentswerecelebratingyearlyBeerFestival.Ourrefusalwasregardedasabadmannertolookdownuponthem.Forthisreason,Iwouldinferthatinternationaltouristsusuallyspendonlyoneortwodaysstayinginthesameplace.Itisimpossibleforthemtothoroughlyhaveagoodknowledgeofthelocalculture.Consequentlymisconceptionanddisputeshappenfrequentlybetweenpeoplesembodiedwithvariedculturebackgrounds.(185words)

Nowletmeturntothediscussionofunderstandinggainedonthetour.Generallyawesterntouristisfondofvisitingdifferentplaceswithexploringdifferentcustoms,particularlythoseprimitiveculturesinremotemountainousareas.Suchanexplorationcanexposehimselfwithmoreopportunitiesofcommunicatingwithlocalpeople,whichmightbeconsideredasagoodwaytobetterunderstandthelocalculture.However,differentinterpretationandreligioneventuallywouldprobablyleadhimtoconcludethatthoseoddtraditionshandeddowngenerationbygenerationinthedestinedregionarenomorethanasuperstitiousbelief.Suchunderstandingdoeslittlegoodtomaintainsoundrelationshipbetweennations.(106words)

Allinall,globaltravelshouldbediscourageduntilunderstandingamidpeoplesoverwhelminglyoutweighsnegativeeffectsliketension.