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1.时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(DaqingMountain);
2.活动的过程;
3.你对于这次活动的评论。
注意:1.词数120左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain-climbingonApril10.Hundredsofustookpartinit.
Itwasaniceday.At8:00am,wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMoutainandsetoutforthetopinhighspirits.Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Whensomefellbehind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreachedthetop.Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.
Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!
你作为一名英语报刊的记者,对一次登山活动进行报道。
作文题中已经给出了基本的要求,展现你作文分数高度的就是你对活动的评论了。下面让我们来看看优秀的范文是如何处理这些细节性的东西的。
1.时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(DaqingMountain);
2.活动的过程;
3.你对于这次活动的评论。
注意:1.词数120左右。2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【范文】
Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain-climbingonApril10.Hundredsofustookpartinit.
Itwasaniceday.At8:00am,wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMoutainandsetoutforthetopinhighspirits.Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Whensomefellbehind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreachedthetop.Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.
Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!
星光中学(XingguangHighSchool)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:
1.时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(DaqingMountain);
2.活动的过程;
3.你对于这次活动的评论。
注意:1.词数120左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain-climbingonApril10.Hundredsofustookpartinit.
Itwasaniceday.At8:00am,wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMoutainandsetoutforthetopinhighspirits.Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Whensomefellbehind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreachedthetop.Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.
Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!
第二节:写作(满分30分)
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件:
1.未及时回复的原因;
2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
注意:1.次数:120~150;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【试题点评】
今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯,时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中,考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣,以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文,相当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的,因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外,本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多,因此,只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法,掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词,并加以针对性训练,这道题目应该不难写。
【经典套路】
第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的
第二段:“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)
第三段:“假期安排”部分
第四段:补充说明+客套话
【高分范文】
DearTom,
Howareyoudoing?(问候)Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutmyplanforthecomingsummervacation.(写信背景)IamsorrythatIdidn’treplywithoutdelay.(写信目的)
HowIwishIwouldreadandreplyyouremailassoonasIreceivedit.However,Iwasbusypreparingformyfinalexamatthattime,whichisvitalforme.Asaresult,Ihadnochoicebuttocompletelyfocusonmystudy.Ibelievethatifyouwereme,youwouldmakethesamechoice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)
Bytheway,Ihaveabusyscheduleformysummervacation.(主题句)Firstandforemost,Iwoulddoaparttimejob,sothatmyinterpersonalskillswouldbeimproved.(拓展句1)Additionally,IwilltakeashorttriptoBeijingtotakeasummercourseintheNewOrientalSchool.(拓展句2)Lastbutnotleast,maybeIwillworkasavolunteerfortheschoolasateachingassistant.(拓展句3)
Thesearemyplanforthesummervacation.What’syours?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.(以合理的客套话结尾)
假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结(Chineseknot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要点包括:
1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)
2.象征意义
3.价格
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已为你写好。
DearTom,
Howareyoudoing?IwonderifyoucouldsellsomeChineseknotsforme.Imadethemmyselfwithredsilkthreads,clothandothermaterials.Theylookreallybeautifulintheshapeofadiamond,about5incheslongand4incheswide.InChina,theseknotsstandforfriendship,loveandgoodluck.Peoplecaneithergivethemasgiftstofriendsorhangthemintheirhouses.Theyareonly12.99USdollarseach.Ifanyonewantstoknowmoreabouttheknots,letthemwritetome.Also,doletmeknowifyouneedfurtherinformation.Thankyou!
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:
李明:高个子,戴眼镜
航班号:CA985
到达:8月6日上午11:30
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
DearPeter,
Howareyoudoing?
I’mwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference,andI’veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou’veaskedforbefore.
Also,I’dlikeyoutodomeafavor.WouldyoupleasemeetmyuncleattheairportandtakehimtohishotelsincethisishisfirstvisittotheU.S.?Thankyouinadvance!
HisflightnumberisCA985,anditwillarriveat11:30am,August6.Myuncleistallandheiswearingglasses.Andhewillbeinabluejacket.
Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
LiHua
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