上海高考英语满分作文范文

【作文题目】

描述你在学校的一次午餐，具体要求如下：

详细描述用餐的情况

简要表述你对这次午餐的感受

这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章，因为如果只是描述用餐情况，显然缺乏深度，夸夸其谈，流于表面。学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的东西。比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中，笔者另辟蹊径，通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来衬托“我”的悠然自得，凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中，作者能够留有一片心灵净土，通过饮食来调节情绪，更好地面对挑战，表现出乐观的人生态度。此文结构简单，文笔清新，语言精准，并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构，不失为一个很好的作文模板，供学生借鉴。

【作文范文】

Theinstantthebellindicatingtheendofthelastclassrang,outoftheclassroompouredallstudentsbutone。Unlikemypeers,Iwasinnohurrytomakearunfortheschoolcanteen,torushthroughlunchandtoreturntotheclassroomforhomework.Iarrivedatthecanteenwhenamassivequeuehadformed.Waitingformyturnpatiently,Ismelledthearomaoftheappetizingfood.Greasyassomedishesmightbe,thewiderangeoffoodpreparedbytheschoolwassuperiorinnutritionalval-uetothatfound

elsewhere.

Thetypicalscheduleofahighschoolerisextraordinarilyhecticandthuslunchbreakisararetimewhenoverworkedstudentscanwinddownandenjoythepleasureprovidedbytheflavorfulfood.Imakeitapointtopampermytastebudsbysavoringeverylittlebitoftasteinfood.WhatIusuallyliketodooverlunchishaveamindlessconversa-tionwithacoupleofstudentswhohavealsolearnttosmelltherosesalongthebonebreakingjourneythroughhighschool.Weroundedoffourlunchwithadessert,re-freshedandsatisfied。Cometothinkofit,itisnotthefoodbutmyattitudetowardslifethataffordsmepleasureandempowersmeinfacinguptovariouschallenges.