2020年高考英语写作高分秘籍

一：开头

句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。

〔原文〕Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.

〔修正〕Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.

〔原文〕Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.

〔修正〕Hearingthebadnews，theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.

二：经过

2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。

①强调句

〔原文〕Imethiminthestreetyesterday.

〔修正〕ItwasinthestreetthatImethimyesterday.

ItwasyesterdaythatImethiminthestreet.

②由with或without引导的短语。如:

Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.

③分词短语。如:

Satisfiedwiththeresult，Hedecidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.

④倒装句。如:

Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.

NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.

Notonlyshouldwestudyinthecollege,butalsolearnhowtobeadecentperson.

⑤省略句。如:

Ifso，victorywillbeours.

Youcanmakesomechangeswherevernecessary.

3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

〔原文〕Hestoppedushalfanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.

〔修正〕Hestoppedushalfanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.

〔原文〕Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.

Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.

〔修正〕Afterashortrest，wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing，tellingjokesandplayingchess.注意使用不同长度的句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句或只用长句。

4.学会使用过渡词。如:

①递进:then(然后)，besides(还有)，furthermore(而且)，moreover(此外)等。

②转折:however(然而)，but(但是)，onthecontrary(相反)，afterall(毕竟)等。

③总结:finally(最后)，atlast(最后)，inbrief(总之)，inconclusion(最后)等。

④强调:indeed(确实)，certainly(一定)，surely(确定)，aboveall(尤其)等。

⑤对比:inthesameway(同样地)，justas(正如)，ontheonehand…ontheotherhand(一方面……另一方面……)等。

相似的比较：similarly,inthesamemanner相反的比较：ontheotherhand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,incontrast,onthecontrary,comparedwith…,

5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:

〔原文〕Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.

〔修正〕Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.

6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:

〔原文〕Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.

〔修正〕Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.

Ilikereadingwhilewatchingtelevisionappealstomybrother.

三、结尾

1、Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,that……(比如说到和谐社会Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,thatweshouldbuildoursocietyaharmonioussociety.)

2、Therefore,it’snotdifficulttodrawaconclusionthat……

3、Asaresult,weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestodosth.(我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么)

4、Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayconcludethat……

5、Obviously(此为过渡短语),wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers